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Hello I am new to forum I'm French ; good writing style but the colors do not go at all excuse me for my writing

Is this a comment about the mock?

yes I like the style but not writing

Do you mean the font?

yes

Ok, I did not understand at first but thanks. I don't mean to be rude at all (and welcome to the forum) but it would be easier to understand if you added punctuation.

ok thank you I know very little English

Logo too simple, other looks better. 3/5

I think the title card looks a bit cheap, other than that its OK.

The Astons are fairly good if not to simple but the Title Cards/Weather Intro/Coming Up is far too simple and would never be on TV - What Titles would end on a simple gradient with text in?

My Advice - is spend a little bit more time on them before uploading them onto the forum - plan them out first, for graphics do a few different versions and select the one you are happier with. I mean you've done 4 mocks in the last month. If you can just take your time your mocks will probably be better - the astons on this are definitely an improvement on your other mocks.